Tooky's Mag on KING CRINGE

Hugely appreciate you covering Improvidence, even as a Halloween Freefriend. I agree with your crit for the most part as well. Specifically in hindsight/in a possible revised future version I'd be like 20% more explicit about the redhead twist early on and probably add an additional wrap-up scene or two to really close out "the situation" he's found himself in. Just needs to be a bit more explicit in general. I have outlined plans for parts 2 and 3 with the same characters over the arc of their lives that I'd like to either release as novellas or combine into a single novel like "Canticle for Leibowitz" one day, but we'll see as there are other projects I really want to get out there too!